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hi everyone

well i want to know if someone can give me an opinion about this lyric i wrote

there's the lyric

A mystery

Drops fall and make a mirror
In my own space
A lot of clones of my face
As malcovich made

The streets are wet
They trip on them
They’re so stressed
What steps we have to take?

Deep inside
A mystery hides
In the middle of the night
Don’t waste the time
Just keep it alive
That’s all right
You’re doing fine

Beyond these points of the wall
There’s something more
To watch, to admire in that hole
That just these spots in front

Deep inside
A mystery hides
In the middle of the night
Don’t waste the time
Just keep it alive
That’s all right
You’re doing fine

Big bang in the past
My heart turns bad
Linking words in a crossword
Look out, go down
A thief in the house
Appearing a doubt while we were out


good luck!!

bye
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hi, i think you're lyrics are actually pretty good.
but there's something missing. i'm not sure what...
what are the lyrics about though?